The Mercenaries - Discussion

I think we get the idea.

 

However, the wounded guy's name is Lucas. Karl is the name of the bandit leader.

 

I have fixed his name. Thank you for pointing it out.

 

So are you back in the mix ytzk? Or is Fatty going to be on the sidelines for a while?

If anyone has any issues with how I'm progressing the story, let me know. Like I said, I'm just making this up as I go, trying to keep the story rolling and flesh it out a little bit.

 

I like what you're doing, Japes. I'm still in the mix, though my interweb may vanish any second.

 

Bugger I had this rather long part of interrogating the bandit and bringing in Eadgar for help on the matter, I wrote in on paper when I was meant to be cataloging some items at the museum. I totally forgot to post it.

 

I can delete my post if you want to post it, no problem.

 

No, its fine, part of the development of character is adapting to what happens out of the writer's control.