http://journeytothevoid.smackjeeves.com/ I'm doing a webcomic based on Arcanum! Protagonized by a male half-orc neutral thief. It's just starting out, but constructive criticism is encouraged.
The intro page looks pretty good. The last two pictures are a little dark and (to my eyes) a bit fuzzy though. Just the same: Keep it going! I, for one, would love to read this.
Also, remove the friggin mature content warning. We don't want to ruin the kids by keeping them from ever growing a pair of balls* do we? *Actually, about half of the kids grow other things
Thanks for the comments! It's great to know that there's people reading my webcomic. I have to leave the adult content message because Smack Jeeves may delete the comic if it's not there when Madame Lil appears.
Ah damn. I was hoping with the orcish descent of the protagonist that it would be a Stupid run-through. Maybe just include the dialogue without the bubbles? I was getting a crowded kind of vibe with all the dialogue bubbles, especially the second-to-last frame. Entertaining nonetheless.
Using the intro movie in the introduction of your comic was a brilliant move. However, always using screenshots out of the game gets old really fast, and the close-ups actually look rather horrid what with the huge pixles and all. Sure you couldn't whip out your amazing drawing skills and make your own illustrations?
I don't mean to shit on your thread, just thought this would be a good place to post a link to http://fromearth.net/LetsPlay/Arcanum/ Some guy playing through Arcanum from the perspective of a young woman with a troubled past. Lots of other games too, check it out!
